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HURRAY!!
Yes. The amount of rps has gone down now, but all of the new people on here need to understand that they can't keep making different rps; they...
Sammi: -wanders around- (OopsTotally forgot about this)
Sammi 15 Distant, not very friendly, but will fiercely protect the people she trusts [img] Her parents died when she was young, and she survived...
ADAM!! UPDATE!!!!!!
Bump!!!
Bump!!!!!!!!!!!
BUMP!!!!
GoodnightBump!!
LOL Percy's a car. Bump!!
AMAZING!!! I love the details!!
(You didn't tell me you made a rp! Can I join?)
BUMP!!
Okay Amber
I think it's a pretty good start. Remember to put tons of details in, like what the characters look like, what their surroundings look like, the...
And for the ideas… I dunno.
Hm… use a thesaurus, because there's some small words that can be improved.
Wonderful tips.
Bump!!
Feedback: UPDATE MORE OFTEN!!! Otherwise, PERFECT.