Separate names with a comma.
This is really good.But I'm really confused at the same time
OMG ELI UPDATE ASAP
No idea what's wrong with those asterisks. All I wrote was Jack with a bunch of K's.
JACKKKK I love it. It's just… PERFECT. Since when did you write stories??? UPDATE. -flails-
I like it so far. Here's a few things I would recommend: ~Be careful with your tenses. This is past tense, right? Because a few times, you...
.-. Bump.
I want to enter, but I'm not sure if I'll have enough time…
FLAILLLLLLLL VAN <333
I will continue this. But not today, and probably not for a while, because ff isn't working. It keeps saying this: [img] And I'm not sure when...
I've been trying this whole day, and this is literally the first time ff worked. It keeps saying this: [img] So it may take a while for the next...
I dunno. Seems good so far, but I can't really see where it's going yet…
*I am *Peace Uhhh… What's the point of this?
Bump :3 SKYYYYY
Update Sky!
UPDATE
BUMP. UPDATE.
Great start. I love the description. ^.^
Okay, here's my advice: ~Use paragraphs. Start a new one every time a new person is speaking. ~Use lots of detail and description. ~Capitalize...