Separate names with a comma.
-I stop and lay still at her touch. My eyes slowly open and I look up at her-
-I toss and turn in my sleep next to Alida-
-I lay peacefully my unconsciousness having turned into sleep-
(okay honey. Goodnight, I'll see you tomorrow)
(Aww do I have to?
(oh lol)
(awww but I don't want to be pale or have bloodlust lol. Can we say my elf half kept that from happening?) -I twitch violently in my unconscious...
(alright. What changes also?) -I fall to my side my face pure pain. I pass out as the pain become too great to endure-
-I feel nothing for a few seconds and then scream in agony as excruciating pain hits me- (So what exactly is supposed to happen? I know nothing...
-I close my eyes and take a deep breath- "I'm ready."
-I stroke her back- "As soon as possible. If now is alright then let's do it."
-I smile wrapping my arms tightly around her- "I'd do anything to have you as my wife."
-I stay silent for a long time thinking.- "I'll do it..."
-I look down at her- "Anything."
-I return the kiss tenderly- "I want to be close to you. I want to he bound to you always." -I slowly reach into my pouch and pull out a box. I...
-I look into her eyes my expression soft and caring. I'm concerned more for her than myself- "You have nothing to he sorry for. You were doing...
(Ahh. That's bypassing in their eyes. They don't realize it has another meaning) -I gently stroke her face- "No you didn't."
(what for?) -I hold her close rubbing her back soothingly.- "Shhh...I'm here for you always." -I think of a way to bring her out of this state-
-I refuse to let her go and pull her back- "No your not. Your the girl I love and I refuse to let you leave me because you think your a monster."
-I pull her into my arms so she's in my lap.- "Shhh....im here. I'm okay..."