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(what's wrong?) -I smile and take her hand setting off- "alright."
-I smile looking down at her- "Since we never got to yesterday how about a romantic boat ride."
-I stroke her back gently- "What kind of feelings?"
-Im immediately up with my arms around her, speaking comfortingly- "Shhh...what's wrong?"
"I'm part elf though as well. That could be why."
-My expression doesn't change- "So is there something wrong?"
-I look at her dumbfounded- "Am I supposed to?" (I'm a good vampire aren't i?)
-I cringe and look at it. I sniff and cringe again. I cautiously place the cup to my lips and take a tiny sip. Almost immediately I spit it out...
(I'm just overreacting I guess....I do romantic stuff for you all the time) -I look back and forth between the cup and her my mouth open in...
(Well it kinda bothered me when you said it was "sweet" to Kris) -I peer curiously into the cup and cringe. I look at her, my face pure...
(Jealous) -I look at Alida and smile and then at the cup. I raise a brow- "What's in there?"
(Oh nothing...) -I wake up finding myself stronger-
() -I sleep peacefully dreaming of Alida-
(?)
-I drift off to sleep-
-I sigh and watch her leave feeling abandoned. I close my eyes-
-With a lot of effort I reach up and grab her hand- "Don't leave."
-I fall back down too weak to sit up- "Weak..."
-I try and sit up- "I don't know..."
-I smile and speak in a weak voice that's almost a whisper- "I think so."