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-I mount my horse and secure all my gear before heading off to the north-
-I blush and smile- "Thank you...I'll see you again, hopefully with the key." -I sprint off through the words-
-I rise to my feet gently pulling her up- "I ride for the volcano immediately." -I tenderly press my lips to hers and pull away- "That's for if...
"I'll slip in and pick the lock to your fathers desk."
"That key should be easy." -I look into her eyes- "I'll get the key from the volcano and break the curse. You have my word."
"And I would break you out..." -I think a moment- "I'll get it."
"It's not your fathers choice who you love..." -I look at her- "Curses can be broken. I would do anything to break it for you."
(Alright.)
(Remember rule number one Kris lol. Don't interrupt)
-I sit down beside her and stare at the water sadness clearly in my eyes- "Your the one person who has been there for me..."
(That's good. Accepted)
-Tears roll down my cheeks- "I see..." -I toss the paper beside her- "Well Zane was an assassin who was trying to kill you. He's dead and you...
"I thought you ran off to decide if you love me or Zane..." -I feel my heart sink fearing her answer- "I love you remember?"
"Sorry...I didn't mean to scare you.." -I look at her with worry- "Who did you pick?"
-I slow down approaching a lake. I see her and walk over to her- "Alida..."
-I stand up and search Zane finding a piece of paper. I open it and widen my eyes in terror at what I see- "I saved her life..." -I sprint off...
-I pull my dagger out and sigh fearing Alida's reaction. I wipe the blood and sheath it- "I could lie....No lying get you nowhere and I couldn't...
(Alright Kris) -I carefully lay him on the ground- "It's worth it knowing she won't be with you..."
"Wrong answer." -I quickly take my dagger and leap forward grabbing him by the shoulder and plunge it deep into his chest, to his heart-
-I stay silent a bit thinking to myself- So he isn't dating her... -I look at him my expression softened a bit- "I'm in love with her..."