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Who agrees with me and thinks she is an amazing writer and should continue?
Shouldn't *
Who loves Alida's stories and says she should give up? I do!
-I see look ahead and see the rope slowly burning away. I begin climbing more frantically and then stop knowing I wont make it. Tears form in my...
-I grab the rope with a grunt and hang on as it swings violently. I retrieve the key and begin climbing. A burst of lava flies up burning me and...
-I reach the top and look down quickly ducking as a spout of lava shoots up. I look seeing its filling quickly. I spy the key suspended by a small...
-The volcano rumbles violently- "Oh great..." -I look back at her- "Stay here..." -I begin sprinting up-
-I stop at the base and dismount.- "Up we go." -I begin trudging up the side-
(Denied with a big no Justin)
-I laugh- "Nor am I. Well figure it out." -I speed up the pace, riding full tilt towards the volcano-
"If the curse is magical then so is the volcano. There's most likely some test you have to go through."
-I put the key in my pouch- "Well in less than an hour the curse will be broken." -I look at the huge volcano off in the distance-
Day Break: Sugarplum_Princess
-I laugh- "It's just soot." -A hawk land on my shoulder with a tiny key attached to its leg. I take it and toss it to her- "Here you are. I had...
-I chuckle an continuing on. I slow down as the ground becomes hard and gray. Soot fly up with each step-
"Fine. Let me do the dangerous work though. I don't want you getting hurt" -I speed off again-
"I can handle myself. I don't want you getting hurt. It's dangerous."
-I look in surprise at Alida- "What are you doing here?!" -The leader takes a step forward and I send an arrow through his skull. The others...
I love it!
-I halt my horse as a bandit steps out onto the road- Bandit: "Evening good sir! This here road belongs to us and in order to pass you must pay a...