Separate names with a comma.
Whoa. Intense. I like it. :3
I'll keep this on the first page.
This is great. Super intense. I would suggest double-spacing your paragraphs and maybe updating less frequently. Many people (including me) give...
I'm bumping my story. I hate when people do this. I'm a hypocrite. Deal with it. D:< :D
Reeeeeeaaaaaaddddd myyyyy sssstorrrryyyyy. That's all. Just kidding. My story (Forgotten.) is about… I dunno. The main character is...
A very emotional piece. The only thing I would suggest is using paragraphs. Easier on the eyes. Oh, and know your 'its' from your 'it's'.
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Buuuuuuuuuuuuump.
It's your choice. If you feel up to the task of making a good story, you should. If not, don't. Simple as that. Personally, I think that if you...
UPDATE JIHI MOTHER****ING UPDATE OR I SWEAR TO GAWD I'LL- CENSORED
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※〜※〜※ Ashlyn desperately tries to twist her arm away, to no avail. The stranger clasps on tighter. "Let me go or I'll call the cops," she...
Bump.
Bump. :3
-pokes-
Bump.
"ZING ;D"? Lolwut…
What the **** did I just read…
This is amazing. Be careful with your tenses, because you switch back and forth. And you should proofread; there are a bunch of spelling mistakes....
GRACIE. HURRY THE **** UP WITH YOUR UPDATE. Please?