Separate names with a comma.
Your tenses >.< ahaha yeah I agree with mist she's naked in a strange room and she wants to know how he knows her NAME? Haha yeah but I can't...
^.^ nice poem some of the line rhythms are a bit off, but otherwise it's great.
AHHH
This seems really interesting, and it's very well written. I like it. Bump!
I miss jihi too please come back.
Mhm
YEP. :D
Not bad. :3 looking forward to the next update.
This seems like an intriguing start. I'm interested in seeing where it goes. If I could offer a little advice, I would suggest to avoid starting a...
I think you should try using paragraphs. Also, it's a little confusing…
@TropicalChick trust me, it's really scary @heavenly and I can't wait. In fact, I think you should bump that update up to right now ;D
OMG THE COMMONER SHOULD BE THE DARK AND TWISTED CREEPER GUY WHO LIKES TO KILL HER. OMG NO ALL OF THEM SHOULD. I think I'm feeling a tad bit...
Ohmygod I think yes.
This story is pretty good. (: Erik should turn out to be some dark, twisted creeper dude and try to kill her or something. That would be pretty...
Ugh I hate wattpad. But I love your story
Awwwww <3Finally
UPDATE. NOW.
SKYYYYYYYYYY Me being obnoxious. This is a good idea and if I decide to start writing I'll let you know.
Love this.
Haha remember me? Amazing story as always, and Daniel obviously