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This is really good. ^.^ There are a few spelling/grammar mistakes, so I suggest you proofread, but it's amazing otherwise. :3
@heavenly Rhy was a roleplayer a while ago. I don't remember if he wrote stories. 0.o
Hey vamp I like the story so far! You have good description and everything. I don't know what's going to happen yet, and I'm looking forward to...
Rhy welcome back!!
Lol don't hurt me I'm commentingken sounds amazingly awesomeI suggest adding a twist because twists are like the best things that could ever...
Good. Unless he turns out to be, like, gay or something. Then I'll be heartbroken.
If Erin doesn't want him I'll take him
Ooh. Sexy. A man of mystery.
Good. BUMP.
Ken sounds hawt. does he look like a Ken doll?
Bump
Bump ^.^
Adam you really need to make a sequel.
Trust me, I will keep reading. ^.^
Ugh you're killing me with your not-updateyness
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I think the number of roleplays right now is fine as it is, but your idea is good. The problem is that a lot of people on here would probably...
Bump.
Oohinteresting. Question: is lotus actually a witch?
Bump :3