Separate names with a comma.
It's a good start. A few spelling/grammar mistakes, but I like the description. I'm looking forward to more.
Good. :D
Who's Mike Myers? Is he Stephanie Myers's brother? Didn't Stephanie Myers write Twilight?
It's not bad overall, I just had a few things to say. There are some spelling/grammar mistakes, so you should proofread, and maybe add a bit more...
?? um thanks
WAFFLES. WITH CHOCOLATE.
Nice job.
^^^^ I did too.
Sounds good.
I'm jelly. He's kinda really mean though DANIEL FTW
BUMP.
What she said. You'll find out who's trying to kill them soon enough.
Bypassing is when you type a swear and use asterisks to keep it from being censored. For example, let's say "pie" was a swear. If you typed pie...
LMAO HAHAHAHAHGAHSHGAHAHAHHAAHAGGAGHAHAHAHWHAHHWIHSHHSBSHWHHAHAWHW
I love this. It's so sad and emotional.
I hate WPadand I hate you for leaving that cliffhanger You better make the sequel soon.
Yep. And I'm not ashamed of it.
BUMPPPPPPP
Bump. ^.^
I don't watch animes, but it might be interesting to read a story about it. >> Maybe you could write a brief explanation on the anime before...