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Great story. Bump
ELI! I love your stories so much
I like this. ^.^ The idea is interesting and the plot seems promising. Just be careful with your spelling; there were a few mistakes.
This is really good.
I remember youuuu
Is this going to be a story, or are you just going to leave it at that? If you do, this is irrelevant to fan fiction.
?Bump?
I love this storyit's really sad though
Adam as in AdamGontier?
Instead of wasting your time commenting you should be writing
Haha that reminds of that song that I forget what it's calledanywaysss… bump.
Haha exactly. Bump.
Ooh. :3 I like.
I think it would be interesting like this, but maybe you could add a twist or something so the story is more original. If you want. ^.^
I like it. ^.^ be careful not to start too many sentences in a row with 'I', because it gets a little repetitive.
No idea what Elfen Lied is 0.o
Bump
It's really up to you, but if you need suggestions, you could try making the girl want to escape. Maybe her mom gets even more crazy and starts to...
Yay I'll keep this alive^.^