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Jack: "Yeah..." He says as he slowly scoots further away from Rhyan.
Jack: "It's getting dark..." He mutters. "I can't really see much."
Jack: "Man get the hell off me." He says shoving him off.
Jack: Sits down, leaning against a tree. He picks up and acorn and tosses it into a make shift basket he made out of sticks.
Jack: "Now we wait until night time." He mutters.
(I'll PM you the plan Rhy.) Jack: Explains the plan... "Got it?"
Jack: Whispers silently to Rhyan. "Okay, here is the plan..."
Jack: "Okay then." Slowly begins to walk to the edge of the woods.
Jack: "I'll guard, those burgers are making me good."
Jack: "I got a knife, that's about it." He mutters.
(He whispered, unless suddenly you want to add supersonic hearing to your profile.)
Jack: "Don't worry, I got ideas." He whispers to him wearing an evil grin.
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Jack: "Your friends seem like assho*les." He whispers to Rhyan.
Jack: "Wait up Kid." He yells as he pursues Rhyan.
Jack: "Maybe uh... Later." He says awkwardly.
Jack: "Where you from?" He says, slowing down.
Jack: Begins to eat quickly. "Where did you get these?"
Jack: "Really?" He ask, hungry.
Jack: "Kid, I'll be your best friend if you can get me some food." He says sarcastically.