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(and I meant Pie)
(Bidam) (he wasn't talking aloud,he was thinking)
(you aren't talking to me right? )
Tiffany:"Um...neither? Isn't there fruit punch or something?" (she is a very innocent girl,she has never taken alcohol before)
Bidam:*thinking to himself* That guy's a beggar,the girl's a vampire... Whoa,this is getting crazy...
Tiffany:*skips along*
(...) Bidam:*asleep in the chair next to Angie's bed(his hair is tied up in a ponytail)*
Bidam:*sees Shu* "Psst!" *gestures to Shu to come over* (he's under the window outside)
(I meant cover to her shoulders lah~ like in tv series...)
(so Shu would smell like a vampire? And Raven and Happiness_Sadness(not sure of his character's name)are vampires?)
Bump! Go for the other guy lah~
(...)
(what is that meant to be? And why isn't Raven snapping at him )
Tiffany:"How about going to that tavern you mentioned?"
Tiffany:"I'm fine with anything..." **
(you're faster than me as usual )
(yes...pop up beside me and ask me what I'm doing you're human or vampire,Shu?)
Bidam:*covers Angie with the blanket* (you know what I mean)
(yay!)