Separate names with a comma.
Hell to the yes I'm happy. ^^ You didn't ruin it! It's awesome! ;D
*" Blasted quotation marks.
She snickered, and parked the car in the driving lot. Lot C, row three to be specific. I awkwardly looked down, only to see Sweeny already sitting...
^^ Hell yes.
I SEE WHAT YOU DID THERE/
>:333
"So, Melodie, do you know anyone going to the day camp with you?" Perfect freaking timing to get a damn job in the summer, mom. I'm not social if...
PM NELLIEBEAR-
Now it's Monday. The day I hate to see because it means I'll be in a camp with a bunch of other social freaks. Sweeny's going though, so I might...
<3Lively writing.
Capitalization is your only error now, but only within dialogue.
Hey, it's UV. ^^
Make it longer and better grammar, dear. (:
:0 Awesome love!
^^ Thank you loves. Working on it and other things at the moment. (:
Just freaking call me Gil. ._. I'm sorry OP, but this thread isn't meant for PIMD, and was poorly written. Move the RP to Future Combat, another...
(back~) Louis: *Spaces out*
Louis: I heard truth or dare! ^^ I'll play~ (Brb, dinner. Be Realistic was updated.)
What the hell? No. Just fucking no. All these damn half assed newbs showing up in Fan Fiction, join an already made RP. We took care of the RP...
I'll update again after dinner, maybe.