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Melodie~ ^^ I sat there frozen in complete fear, and bam. Idea. I whacked Carly with my left forearm, growling. "Shut up." "Make me, Harveed....
Louis: Pft, I never left.
^^ See, freaking amazing! >:3 Don't doubt yourself woman-
All caps rage, Anthony? XD
Louis: Wall-What? *Blinks*
xD I can't update anymore, it's Nelliebear's turn. ^^
Louis: *Laughs, staring off into space*
Melodie~ I was sitting on the wooden floor, listening for his reply to Carly's words. The horror. I looked around the room, trying to keep my...
xD Nellie might update too, but I'll do another flashback.
0.0 That doesn't sound crazy...at all... *Insert sarcasm*?
^^ I'll keep this as alive as I can, I've been working often.
^^ Bumped.
Melodie's POV~^^ Someone flicked my ear, and my right hand stopped moving. I turned to the girl next to me. In my head, it was pure disgust....
^^ Updating today
^^ Melodie's POV~ I flexed my right hand multiple times, twitching. I couldn't help it. Being a stunt ribbon dancer while doing a ballerina act?...
:3 You can update again if you want, ima make this one long. Sorta.
:3 I think I'm just going to write a flashback of Melodie's. (;
^.^ Jilly, don't put yourself down. You're a damn good writer! ((:
^^ Yes you did! I just saw one mistake. *a long. That's all I saw. :3 Everything else was perfect.
^^ You did an awesome job, love! ^^