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(Lily do you two not notice Ari being attacked?) I laugh, licking the blood off my fangs, and I grab her in a chokehold. Lucas: No! *struggles...
It isn't even in his point of view! 3rd person
(homeworm )
(Feck off, Lily. ) Lucas: Agh! Raven, stop- *gets shoved across the cafeteria* I grin at Ari, swiping my claws across her face. "Crimson… such a...
Is everybody in? I especially love: A melancholy town where we never smile
Lucas: *blinks, and backs away with Ari* My grin grows wider, and I jump through Lucas, tackling Ari.
(wake the feck up Lily! )
I tense, turning around, and drop the slayer to the ground, grinning. "Yes…?" I say, taking a step forward, trailing blood behind me.
Damn, Ari
Lucas: *gasps at the sight of Raven, widening his eyes* Ah…
isn't it awesome?
Lucas: *blushes, and wraps his arm around her shoulder* I giggle maniacally, my eyes turning black, and I repeatedly stab the Slayer, even though...
Lucas: *smiles, taking her hand, and walks awkwardly to the cafeteria* Sorry… I haven't walked in a while… I'm used to flying.
Lucas: Ah… so! Wanna go get lunch now?
I grin, snapping her neck, laughing darkly as her blood splatters on my cheek. "Too late…"
Lucas: *blushes slightly, kicking at the ground*
I tighten my grip around the Slayer's throat, and extend my claws, making them cut into her skin. ()
Painful Indulgence?
Lucas: *smirks* I'm flattered
Lucas: *smiles, watching her* Well, besides the fact I'm talking to a beautiful girl, nothing much…