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(sorry)
Dam-bi: I glance at my watch and realise I'm late. "Kira,follow me!" I say,grabbing her hand and pulling her to my car.
Dam-bi: I gasp,"You have weapons too?" I cover my mouth,realising I said 'too' by accident.
Dam-bi: I giggle and reply,"You'll know later. Just one thing,can you promise me you won't get angry or try anything? Please?"
(Is this a brand-new RP or a continuation? If it's new,you won't remember them. If it's a continuation,Kira and I are wrong. :P)
Dam-bi: I gasp,"Maybe I can help you..." I call Bidam,my elder brother,and say into the phone in Korean,"Oppa(brother). I need your help. Do you...
(haha Jade,it's okay.) Dam-bi: "Why?" I ask.
Dam-bi: I return with a medium-sized wheelie box,full of outfits,make-up,and real weapons. I laugh nervously,"Those are props. I only use them for...
(That was meant to be :O not :O) haha)
(oh yeah! Miranda wouldn't know who Bidam,Opal and Dolph are! :O)
Dam-bi: I drive her to my house,then lead her to my Korean-themed bedroom. "Here! Sit here for a moment,I'll go get the make-up kit!" I smile.
(oops. )
Dam-bi: I take Kira's hand and pull her to a glossy black Honda. "Here! Hop in." I say,gripping the steering wheel.
(I know! But are we in modern or olden time period? I don't know whether to take you to my house in a black Honda or a dark brown horse! )
Dam-bi: "Come on! I'll take you there." I say happily. (is this modern or olden? :X)
Dam-bi: I smile warmly at Kira,"Do you want to come to my house? I can give you a makeover!"
(I do not understand what was with the guy thing. :P) Dam-bi: I shake Kira's hand,smiling,"I'm Dam-bi."
Dam-bi: Slightly taken aback,I just sit there,wondering what is wrong with this girl. (Dam-bi is a girl. She's Bidam's younger sister. )
(Jade!! :D)
Dam-bi: I gather up my courage and ask,"I haven't seen you around here before. What's your name?" I smile,hoping I don't get exposed.