Separate names with a comma.
( :roll: )
(yup)
(start reading from page one haha )
Alcheon: I sit on a cliff,throwing rocks into the river below.
Alcheon: "Just stay away from him." I leave the house,throwing Kira's belt to her.
Alcheon: I see Bidam bleeding and I hurriedly pin Angie to the wall. Quickly,I bandage him up and help him onto another bed. "Who are you?" I ask...
(He left Kira and Opal in the tree)
Alcheon: I take Kira's belt and rush to Bidam's house(also where Dam-bi and Alcheon live). When I reach there,I see Angie kissing Bidam's...
(I am back!!)
Alcheon: "Maybe. If you don't try anything."
(hey! You're taking advantage of Bidam here! ) (gtg wash my hair,give me about five minutes)
Alcheon: "Give me that." I look at Kira's weapon belt(pretend you have one). "I'll bring you to him then." I narrow my eyes.
Bidam: My eyes flutter and then close again.
Alcheon: "How do I know I can trust you?"
Bidam: (still unconscious)
(Shane? Who's that?)
Alcheon: "How do you know so much?"
(you mean Alcheon? ) Alcheon: I widen my eyes. "Why are you looking for him?" I narrow my eyes.
(who are you talking to?)
(LOL!!) Bidam: (he's saying nothing 'cause he's unconscious )