Separate names with a comma.
xD Haha, I hate being sick.
Phoebe~ His sister was yelling at me, and I was screaming right back. I may look small, but I sure had a loud mouth. "Did you hurt him?!" she...
----- Phoebe~ I groaned, wiping the blood off my mouth. Another fight. May punched me on the ice, and I hit against the railing. I felt tears...
It was
XD
I laughed a bit.
Melodie~ I froze, and my face felt inflamed. Carly's smirking face made me want to explode. "What's wrong, Harveed? Hm?" I blinked, shaking. She...
^.^ Lovely. *Squish*
(: D'awww thank you. ^^ It wouldn't be awesome without Nellie. :3
Like, if you're putting an action before dialogue, you need a comma. E.g. I walked over and asked my mother,"Where is Jack?"
Phoebe~ I looked up at him, my face crimson with blush. I really was pushing the rules a bit. He smiled, and it was driving me mad. I leaned...
Phoebe~ After skating for a bit, I bit my lip and pushed him gently to the railing. We were towards the back of the rink, and most people...
xD Alright.
^^
(Have no idea.) Phoebe: *Hums, sitting and reading in the hallway*
Angelita~ I sighed,"Well, if you hear another ghost, tell me." I disappeared into the attic, sighing slightly. LeeAnne~ I sighed happily,...
^^ Thank you~
>.< Omg!
Melodie~ I poked him, with a smile smile. I blinked, and paused before yawning and laughing again before asking,"Sweeney? Do you sing?" I had...