Separate names with a comma.
Oh. Okay. Well I'm honored.
I'm going to assume this is false…?
I don't watch football… but go patriots!
Um… hurray? Did anyone actually vote for these?
And right now, lol.
So many beautiful and handsome people on here!
The explanation is a bit confusing, but overall nice job.
If it's just plastic, then how is it moving??
This doesn't belong in fan fiction. Please post it in campus. If you want more money I would suggest farming, partying, or buying ec's to trade...
Oops I didn't realize how that sounded. I meant I'll be the beta reader for anyone, not that I'll be everyone's beta reader. Lol.
I volunteer to be the beta reader for everyone?
I hate jeans with a passion.?
It's not bad, but it feels like you're listing her entire life just like that. It's moving very fast. Although a lot of the events in that are sad...
Sounds good! It could help teach new writers tips, and it'd be interesting to read.
As expected: you have some grammar/spelling/capitalization/punctuation mistakes. Anyways, I like this. The creatures are unique, not like the...
It's a good start. Remember to proofread -- there are some technical errors. Also, I sort of feel like you're just listing everything, rather...
I like this. A lot.
Bye.
I like some of the ideas. Gift spam, colored names, and hiding gifts. For the wall post, I like it, but that's what a status message is for. I...
I'm confused… wouldn't you need at least 30 minutes to find out what happens in 30 minutes? Can't exactly see the future here.