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Alcheon: I turn around,ready to close the door.
Epic fail. :3
Alcheon: "..." I look at Kira with a gaze full of sadness and confusion.
Aww...tell us!
(sounds weird,Alcheon arriving before Kira.)
(Oh yeah...) Alcheon: (he somehow got home before Kira) I open the door slowly,then as I see Kira,my eyes widen. "..."
You have 5 readers now(with me and Jade).
(Um...Kira?)
(hey...didn't Kira meet Alcheon before? When he carried Dam-bi away?)
(close as in close,but not THAT close)
(leave as in walk away not run away)
(Cool.) Alcheon: I grab Kira's hand and pull her closer,staring into her eyes hard,before letting go really hard,almost causing her to fall...
(falcon kick?) Alcheon: I fall to the ground(like kneeling or something),but I still don't answer.
Aslan!! :B Rabbit.
Alcheon: I sigh. (He's so upset,he's kinda not seeing Kira 'cause of his memories and stuff)
Alcheon: "..."
Alcheon: I gaze at Kira with a cryptic expression.
(*weak smile*)
Alcheon: I slowly walk around,slightly distracted by my memories of Deokman(he's sad). (He's only LOYAL to Deokman,not in love with her :3)
(Oops.)