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Alana: "No offence to you, or your popularity, but I don't think they would..."
No you didnt
Pervs. Role-Players (Dirty). Beggars. Noobs. Inactives. People who cry on walls/forums.
Kirsten: She gets bored then sits on the gravel, fiddling with her short white hair.
Alana: "Boring videos of me playing the violin...most of the comments are 'how lame!' or 'why this?' "
Alana: "Wow...I've done some YouTube videos, but only got about a 1,000 hits."
Alana: Trying to change the subject. "So...your band got signed, huh?"
Alana: "No...well...she might be...that might be why I was sent here..." She looks at the ground, afraid of her poor, druggy, grotty background....
Alana: "That's what she told me so that I didn't get upset..."
(If you look at the thread, the rooms are singular.)
Alana: "OK...I'm Alana Perry, I'm a violinist and my mum used to be addicted to 'sugar'"
Alana: "Oh OK. I play the violin!" Puts her hands in her jeans pockets. Kirsten: She goes to the changing rooms and changes into a pink vest top,...
(How do you know the rooms aren't sound proof, all recording studios are! And there are practice rooms, I just thought you guys would've figured...
Kirsten: Gets to the gymnastics gym and sits on the pummel horse, re-glueing one of her nails back on.
Kirsten: She decides to turn around and head to the gymnastics gym, as she has never been there before.
Kirsten: She gets bored of following Sean, and makes her way to the fountain. Alana: "So...what's your talent, Oliver?"
[b]Facilities PE Department [img] Swimming Pool [img] Football/Soccer Pitch [img] Rugby/American Football Pitch [img] Outdoor Basketball Court...
Alana: Walks through. "Thanks..." Kirsten: "I'm stupid basically..."
Kirsten: "Yeah...it does that when I get complimented..." Looks at her feet as she walks. Alana: "Cool. And it's just because my last name is...