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(it says bleache instead of bleached I could list everything wrong with this but it would be a waste of my time -the dark critic)
Colin: oh there you guys are here I brought you guys some presents. -tosses a katana to blade two smgs to Ava and two pistols to Annabeth-
Colin: hey guys where are you
Colin: -returns to base- hey guys I'm back!
(try using dark green or dark blue or red -the dark critic)
Colin: -gets up and looks for an indication of direction of departure-
(also same goes for mideaval rp)
(many spelling mistakes need to be fixed the light green text makes it hard to read and don't advertise on my hunted rp -the dark critic)
Colin: -goes to a bar-
Colin: -kneels down and runs his hand along the ground then stands up- there was a fire here
(Revolvers [img] Shotgun [img] Smg [img] Assault rifle [img] Katanas [img] Sniper [img] These are what his weapons look like)
Colin: -finishes customizing his weapons-
Colin's POV Day in day out always the same thing. I fight crime and I go to school. The guys at my school always ask me why I don't have a...
(k I'll get to work on the next one)
Colin: -returns to the base with the weapons and starts customizing his own weapons-
(here it is) Meanwhile at Emile's hideout "Son of a!" cried the man as Emile injected him with poison. "Die you murderer!" Emile thought because...
(oh sorry I was a little pre-occupied for the past little while I'll get right to work on my update sorry for the inconvenience)
Colin: -walks through the woods assassinating soldiers as he goes and taking the weapons-
(all accepted)
Colin: -sits on his throne-