Separate names with a comma.
(the same thing as Katniss will happen right Your to predictable!)
Ben-smiles and puts the ring on your finger and kisses you-
Zack-ok....ill show you to your room-
Zack-then why the pause?
Zack-Persephone u ok?
Ben-maybe not my sisters doll... -smirks and takes out a little box and opens it- I was holding it for a few months and then ill ask you....but...
(THANK GOD!!! Lemme guess Lust tatoo?)
(FUCK REALLY!!? WHAT THE FUCK IS YOUR PROBLEM WITH CRAZY PEOPLE!!?)
(lol what does she mean?)
Zack-raises eyebrow- So you got more sinful by each sin? How?
Zack-pfft!! The seven sins? Why would put tht?
Ben-looks at you sadly and hugs you- Why?
(SPELLING ERROR!!)
Zack-whatever... -sees a tatoo almost everywhere- Why so many tattos?
Zack-fine...she has a mental problem...she has a split personality...she cant control herself sometimes an turns aggresive.... -sighs and sits...
Ben-smirks- What Did you say?
Zack-sighs sadly- Ill tell you later....
Ben-looks a bit a far off amd shakes head and smiles at Marisol- Yes?
BITCH DO SOMETHING!!
Zack-piks you up- Ill be right back to show you around... -takes Raven to the nurse and they take her to a room- -goes back with Persephone-...