Separate names with a comma.
Tay:-sitting down-
(lol nice)
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Christi:uh we can go to the restaurant.
Christi:-blushes- uhm yea
(I'm soo getting that next year!!)
Christi:-takes his hand- uh I'm Christi.
And I haw no idea why I'm getting yelled at!! And hated so much over there!!! I know they said I caused drama and posted slutty pics but I stopped...
Well lets just let it stay here and if the rp does then let it die... And mine will most likely be Christ.
Uh crush will be a secret to everyone but it's going to be either Christ or jayde
It's a secret right now
(ohk) Tay:-walking around- Christi:-sitting-
(uh shall we continue?)
Name: Tay Age: 16 Junior Looks:[img] Nice, A little shy but mostly outgoing, Loves to hang out with friends, Likes to have fun Doesn't really care...
Tay:-walks towards the lake-
Lily:-sits on the table- Christi:-jumps down from tree and walks to cabin-
(I'm here!)
To space it out use like paragraphs.
It's pretty good so far but like he said just add some more detail maybe write more an space it out.
Lily:-goes to cafeteria- Christi:-climbing the trees-