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Jeremi: *exasperated* "Look at you! You can barely form a coherent sentence! Now drink this!" *holds out a royal blue thermos flask with a hot...
Jeremi: *sighs loudly,somewhat exasperatedly* *carries Alida into her room*
Jeremi: *jumps onto Alida's balcony* "Hey,why're you out in the cold like that?" *wraps his jacket around Alida*
Bidam: *looks back slightly* "I'm sorry..."
(basically,he helped her back to her balcony,then left)
Never! I'm bringing it back
Bidam: *sees Alida hanging off the balcony* *rushes off and saves her,grabbing her and leaping down to a tree below* "Be careful next time..."...
Bidam: *sends a dove to Alida's room with a letter*
Thanks!! Could you critique it in Readers Paradise? Hmm,it depends. I might have her in a sub plot which will result in a slightly...
you're in already!! There might be a sub-plot with Ari. I don't know...
Bidam: *in the forest*
~Chapter 7~ Yushin,the guy with Deokman,was to have an arranged marriage with one of Mishil's daughters,Ari. Deokman broke down and cried,but...
New update on the next page!
Bidam: "How can I,when your father's the one who wants to kill them?" *looks at Alida for a moment with sad,unwavering eyes,then jumps out of the...
Bidam: "Nothing..." *sighs*
(but still averting his eyes from Alida's gaze)
Bidam: "My pals..." *saying the truth this time*
Bidam: "D...Delphine... And Alexander..." *lying*
Jeremi: *winks and runs off,Jolie following*
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