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Jeremi: *looking up at the sky* "I'm sure he's happy up there... With Deokman..."
Dam-bi: *sleeping in her room* (sleeping to get over her grief ) Jeremi: *lying in the grass next to Kira*
Dam-bi: *rushes into the room,Jeremi following* (time skip ) -2 weeks later-
It's a continued story,hun.
()
(Dam-bi said that)
() Jeremi and Dam-bi: *rush to hospital* "Kira! Is it true? Did oppa..."
Jeremi: *iPhone 4S drops out of his pocket* *continues walking,not noticing it*
(huh? Bidam's dead...)
Um,I just want to critique this. Please don't take it to heart First,conversations. Conversations like this: Father asked"why are you here?" Or...
(XD) Doctor: "I'm sorry." *opens the door to a room,where Bidam is lying,dead*
(sign-up for my own RP XD XD) (Name:Jeremi Age:19 Personality:Witty, kind, friendly, forgiving, loves animals, cute, funny(not intentionally)...
(XD)
(aww thank you Kira )
-one hour later- Doctor: *comes out* "I'm sorry Miss. We were unable to save him as the arrow punctured his heart..."
(I'm sensitive 'cause... He said he liked me )
(seriously,are you crazy? ) (just change the song )
(I was planning on this dying )
(sorry )
(sorry rant over )