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Annabeth:-sits next to percyous- you know the guy very well percyous... And well there's this uh uhm.... -looks around again-
Annabeth:-looks around-
Annabeth:percyous! It's now or never!!! People are going to start dying!
Annabeth:percyous,it's about that guy I wanted to tal to you about, I think we should go somewhere private to talk.
Annabeth:percyous! I really need to tell you something!! It's really important!
Annabeth:-mutters- I'm going to tell percyous,he doesn't think I trust him.
(haha he's an old man)
I don't care what it is as long as it keeps me interested which that does sound interesting
Annabeth:well he's a very cunning person... -sees James a little and moves closer to percyous-
Please keep writing this, I like how it started. Yes there's some mistakes but please don't let other peoples criticisms keep you from finishing a...
I just want to see you write a story and finish it,I'll read it all the way, but I want to see to write something I think you start off a story...
() Annabethg:well his name is...-looks around-
Ava:-walks around- Lily:-sitting down-
Lily:yea -laughs-
Lily: oh the that would be hard.
(yea I know it would add a little BLAM to it wouldn't it?)
Lily:I'm sure we can figure it out right?
(I was actually thinking about sayin it was james)
Lily:oh I see.
Annabeth:someone...