Separate names with a comma.
Annabeth:that's cool, I love how it's always dark and has a full moon I just feel so terrific!
Annabeth:uhm yea hehe uhm.... I'm annabeth!
Ava:can't you do the flashing thing? -sits down- Annabeth:I'm a uhm human. Alex:-walkin around-
Annabeth:-still looking at him curiously- what are you doing here then?
Ananbeth:-shakes head and looks at him curiously- aren't you a human?
Annabeth:-looks up and sees him and looks scared-
Ava:true. Annabeth:-laughs a little rolling on the ground-
Ava:I don have parents Annabeth:-runnin aroud human territory not blending in at all- Alex:-walking around the border-
Annabeth:-walking around- Alex:-walkin around in human territory-
Ava:and I'm a vampire
Ava:I'm ava. I'm 16
Pretty good start, but like they said said paragraphs,longer updates blah blah blah haha update
Ava:-laying up a tree/ Annabeth:-looking around but sitting-
Ava:-pouts a little and follows him-
Ava:ohk then point me the way!
Ava:yes... -looks around the starts walkin away- well see ya.
Ava:-looks at his hand for a second then takes it- Annabeth:humans are do wierd! Alex:-goes to the fire and notices a lot of people around it-
Annabeth:-watches the fire standing close to it so the debri hits her- Alex:-sees the fire- what the?
Ava:wait what! U could have just walke through ! Annabeth:-looks back at where jack is-
So for me school is starting on Thursday so I will be in whenever I can, if they fix the wifi in the school then it won't be a problem of me being...