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Jess: -Jumps across the water and lands on a lily pad-
Jess: -Warches Sophia fly by, wishing she could fly-
Jess: -Walks towards the lake-
Downfall of us all-A day too remember
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Thanks I'll update soon, but haveing to write a completely new story for my English assesment so most likely wgen I've finished that
(Read back...Yeah I ate a rabbit foot. I'm a vampire not a fairy. ._. Vampires suck blood. Just be glad I didn't say human leg)
Jess: -walks to dorm-
Jess: -Looks at Jack slightly confused- Uh, why are you In a tree anyway?
Jess: -Picks up her sketch pad and scowls- Thanks
Jess: -Bites hack a retort, feeling wierder- Okay Jack...Can I get up now?!
Jess: -Sighs- How long do I have to stay like this for? -Starts to feel wierd-
(You don't have to die...D: )
Jess: -Looks up at the ghost- Idiotic slave -Sighs and looks at Jack annoyed- *** -Kicks her feet around- You should give your ghost a better name...
(You don't need to leave...You wern't ruining it.Just make your character wear tighter shorts and quit hallucinating about sharks ) Jess: -Grits...
Jess: Ok, Angel -Smirks- Is there even a difference?
() Jess: -Rolls eyes- Whatever, I'll take that as a compliment. -Looks him over- Damnit another Angel?
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Jess: -Keeps her head down and carries on drawing- A vampire killing someone...-Smirks- (That too, but look at the face closely-.-)
Jess: -Starts to sketch on a notepad- (-.- Cant stop laughing...Oh god I have a dirty mind)