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Yeh but it's like the same base of the story any way it's good
It's good but u like stole my story idea lol x
Ok could u write more please?
Jodie: ok bring it on! -climbs onto the diving board and spins vertically 3 times in the air before gently plunging through a rubber ring doing...
A small tear dropped like the rain from my eyes as I felt helpless and alone, my last chance was to leave the house and call the police, all the...
Lol ok x
Try reading other stories to get ideas and also make this update longer, I don't know where you are or who you are or even why you are doing it!...
thankyou
-stands back and does 4 cart wheels the 4th one goes into the pool- Jodie: ta dah -laughs-
Jodie: wow Danny Hey I'll give you a swimmin trick show down -laughs and climbs out-
Dun dun dun...
I stood in the room confused as I tried to recall what happened, I kept asking myself "was that real?" "was that true?" "should I venture up to...
Ok I will x
Well to be honest your really new and this isn't how to start a good rp... I think you should just leave this thread to die... Sorry
I really like it and I think the story line is great
Jodie:cool
Thanks xxx
Jodie: common Danny -smiles and swims around-