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(Cya)
Jess: Oh -Nods, looking around- Lets start then -Smiles-
Jess: -Fiddles with the poles-
Jess: Cool room -Looks around puzzled- Never seen it before though...Heard rumoars but the room...Well, I wouldn't have imagined it to look like this
Jess: -Eyes widen- This school is so freaky...-Grins anyway-
Jess: -Walks into the animal tent- Lily: -Practices on rotating bars-
Jess: -Hums whilst sticking one of the poles into the ground- (Did I miss anything big?D: )
Jess: Uh proffesor, I know old age makes you mad, but I'm pretty sure that's a wall not a classroom...
Jess: -Rolls her eyes and says sarcastically- Yes, sir -Follows him-
Jess: -Puts the book on a shelf, stands up and follows Kris-
Jess: -Grins- Understood
Jess: It's not like there's many takers for the DATDA job, I'd doubt she'd fire you. What year do we learn about patronuses in, anyway?
Jess: -Raises an eyebrow, smirking slightly- Whats she gonna do, hiss at you? -Laughs-
Jess: Hmm that's hard to believe...Why not prove it by showing me how to do the patronus spell? -Grins-
Jess: Really? From what I can see, you look more like a book nerd -Smirks, teasing- I'd have thought it would be the other way round
(Oh okay. Cool. =D) Jess: -Looks up seeing Kris. Says quietly- Shouldn't you be doing whatever teachers do?
Jess: -Carries on reading, not noticing other students come in- (Whats that?:0)
It reminds me of the old game. Something to do with a fish. Think Reaper1 made it. (Or something like that.) I wanna know what the surprise is...
Hmm, it's quite good but some things could be improved: (Others may have said this already.) •Include more detail. •Use a new line for when a...
Sorry, been ill. Will update tonight.