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Jodie: Ali are you still ok... You can join if u want?
Jodie: ready for the 400m now? -smiles-
-smiles back and finishes the 800m next to Derek-
-goes to kitchen to make dinner- Jodie: hey Emma what do you want to eat?
Jodie: I fell a bit sick to be honest... You?
Jodie: anyone wanna come my dorm for a take away tonight? -smiles-
Jodie: what? -smiles slightly concerned-
-carries on running Next to Derek-
-wakes up- Jodie: em... Hii
Jodie: ha ha it's happens when you train everyday! Your pretty fast too -laughs-
-looks at Derek and smiles doesn't try to run ahead just jogs next to derek-
-sprints ahead of you- Jodie: pace your self it's 2 laps remember -laughs and gets further ahead -
On your marks... Get set... Go!
Jodie: em... Ok I understand... So derek ate you ready...? -smiles -
Great story it's extremely imaginable and the ONLY criticism is your paragraphs... I love it all!
Jodie: I was think start with the 800m then 400m then 200m then 100m then finish with 400m hurdles... Sound ok to u?
Jodie: Awh ali aren't u gonna join us?
Jodie: ready to start? -smiles-
-comes out in running shorts and a vest top- Jodie: ok I'll just warm up -stretches and does some drills-
Really good but I couldn't read it all