Separate names with a comma.
( I'm going to once it goes onto the next stage)
-walks into my home and through to the stables-
Jodie: ok -smiles at you and gets of bus- Jodie: my house is just here...
Jodie: yeh I would like that... -smiles- Jodie: maybe you could come to mine sometime too...
Jodie: so derek are you excited... I was thinking we could ride on the beach? (my house is a large stone building with 5 floors the top one is mine)
-smiles at Derek and gets on bus-
Jodie: yeh, I didn't realise you lived near me!
Jodie: sorry were gonna have to get the bus -smiles at you- Jodie: is that ok?
Jodie: ok great. -walks to the bus stop-
Jodie: ha ha ha sorry! Hey we never managed to go riding... Wanna go now? -smiles-
Jodie: -sees Derek run to the toilet and waits for him to come out-
Jodie: ha ha cool -watches Ali with the slingshot-
Jodie: cool, me to
Jodie: hey Ali what class have you got next? -smiles-
Jodie: looks at Ali- hi Ali!
I think you can join although the person who started this isn't here...
-walks out of maths and sits down Under a tree-
Huh?
Nope it's doesnt
Hmm I'm goons try it... just testing but I don't think it's gonna work x