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Cool I like it so far keep it up
Okay post again soon cause its a good story so far
Sweet nice flashback
Yeah u should start I really wanna read it now
Mia write soon please and Lehilah (I forget the right spelling) that is interesting
Yeah only when he has time to react it's not always diamonds only when he wants it to be
James Teen if possible Caring to his friends and will give his all to protect them is a quiet guy that is very strong physically and mentally...
I try but u don't need to use him if u cant don't change ur story if u cant use him good luck
Hey I bet u want a dude in this too right or a villain so James 6'2 Alias: The Swordsman Costume: Denim jeans actually a reflective polymer that...
Okay I agree it's a little sloppy but it's a fine story it just need a touch up on the grammar and some people who won't go over board with the...
omg I just feel down the stairs laughing at that cute little monkey he should be a great solider
Bump and update now!!!!!!!
Bump
Sorry it's really long
Jim 6'6" Age whatever Make me a bad guy Cold and merciless towards any who appose but is soft and kind to the ones close to him even though he...
Bump update like now!
Update!
this is awesome
Real good keep going and just do what ever u want
Sweet story