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Kaitlyn Stable girl Looks: [img] Only with long brown hair and green eyes Shy timid Easily scared Loves animals Great singer Sweet Kind Wants...
So excited
Lots of grammatical errors but other wise this is really amazing!
Kailtlyn 16 Trainee but a great healer and equestrian person Looks:[img] Personality: Shy Caring Timid Loving Sweet Fun Introverted
URGH! Just because you "don't feel like it" (look quotation marks) doesn't mean you shouldn't. That's lazy writing. Heres an idea, you go read...
This is all one long sentence that cant even qualify as a sentence because there's NO PUNCTUATION. You need quotation marks on both sides of all...
Oh for the love of god what has happened to the English language
Kaitlyn: ok! Smiles broadly (night
K; I don't care.
Ok then
Kaitlyn: smiles and grabs his hand
Kaitlyn: hugs him. It's ok
Kaitlyn: oh. Ok stands up.
Kaitlyn: laughs and brushes hair out of her eyes
Kaitlyn: giggles
Kaitlyn: smiles and kisses back
Kaitlyn: quickly kisses him and blushes. o.o
Kaitlyn: blushes.
Kaitlyn: giggles stupidly