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May Tulas [img] Age 17 Personality Has a problem with daydreaming during the most awkward times. She's curious by nature and friendly with...
( The issue was addressed and I did state ' NO GOD MODDING '! Stop fighting guys!! I'm seriously getting irritated with how you two get in to...
. Daniel held Aliza close to him against his chest. Her gentle breathing the only thing, that made him...
Nia watched the ground, hearing Ikki hit Ice, " Ice...", She mumbled and cringed. Gaze going blurry, she frowned. Perhaps it was much too early...
Nia turned her head away in annoyance. She wanted so badly to wipe that smug look off Ikki's face.
Nia lifted her icy glare to Iiki, " I would love to rip you from the inside out. "
Nia growled softly and let her hair hide her face. Glaring at the ground, she felt humiliated. It only enraged her further.
Nia rolled her eyes and shifted her gaze away. Irritated with the fact that she couldn't move. She eyes her gun that lay a bit of a distance away.
Nia growled softly, her gaze narrowed on Ikki, " You dirty little..", She snapped at him.
Nia glared icily at Ikki as she fell on to her knees. She felt her legs go slightly numb. Dammit, they were smarter than she thought.
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Nia flipped Ikki on to his back right after Ice kicked him. Placing distance between them. She had her gun pointed at Ikki's stomach. Glaring side...
( Navi please rephrase your post. It's god modding Hun and were not allowed to god mod. )
Nia heard Ice, but didn't reply. Not wanting to let the enemies know she was there. She narrowed her icy gaze, " Only difference is. I'm not...
Nia had her small knife out, pointed at his lower area. Having felt him come up behind her. She kept her gaze on Aki, her gun still at his throat,...
Nia pointed her gun at Aki's throat, " I have nothing to lose. Just a few more targets to get rid of. "
Nia stepped out slightly from her hiding spot. Glaring coldly at Aki.
Nia watched Aki with an arched eyebrow. Moving her gun out, she shot at his leg.
Nia growled and headed towards the shooting. She hid behind a building and peeked around.