Separate names with a comma.
-walks behind houses and sees Zeke by the bodies and my eyes widen-
-sees explosion and stands there, then runs towards it-
From him too. They were on the desk when I walked in
-looks at each of them then places my father and mother next to each other then places my baby sister on my mothers lap then walks out with my...
I don't know....
-looks around the family room where my parents and baby sister have been gunned down-
Uh, no....it's from my dad
Yup, know what he looks like
(sure zacks smart)
Okay.
(LOL VIOLET!) -looks over city- hey
-whispers- come in
(totally) -sits on balcony holding rose and quietly singing-
-walks back into shelter, rubbing my hands together and wincing-
Woohoo!
-read note and grabs rose then smiles-
-sighs and groans as I wipe my hands on my pants-
I see...
Nice spelling zeke