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OHMYGOODNESS YOU'RE KIDDING ME!!! Eh.
Because she ate INSTANT NOODLES and was singing songs from a certain play called ANNIE.
Lock this useless thread that is clogging up space and pushing other threads back. Really. I see these "OH IM SILENCED" threads every. Single....
Oh, lol.
Maybe use paragraphs more? But other than that, it's good!
I shall give critique now! Mean Andi ON. Loljk, I'll play nice.
I have a feeling like this was the prologue or something. And I told Chloe I'd critique, but it's not that far into the story yet to notice...
Bump. Make sure to be more descriptive on how exactly this and that happened. It's a good story, otherwise.
Yiiiz! That's is why I don't update. :3
Oh this is really good. Bump!
BUMPPP!!!!!
Thesoloandi. (Forever alone. )!
Hancmkesngwkv continue! This is so freaking good. How could I have not read it before?!?! BUMP!
Bump!
Damnit I thought Zach was Mason in the other update so I got really confused. Bump!!!
MALLLFHHHUUUNNNCCTIIISSSOOOONNNN!!
Bump Mia!
Bumpbumpbumpbump! Aww, no problem Mini! You're a great writer yourself!
Auuuttooooooheccooorrrreccxxxttt Issas shhuutttuuuuppphhiiiddd.
Ittttsssss kkknnnnnoooootttttt mmeeeeeee theeeeiiiittthhhhheeeerrrr.