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Dae: takes in the conversation quietly, and speaks up so she can only just be heard "So what you are saying is we've been government property all...
Dae: shifts slightly, then a pain shoots up her leg. Looks at the other teenagers, not recognising any faces and starts getting stressed slightly...
Omg I forgot to proof read this as im tired but here's a few corrections *his instead of hos "where?" Instead of "where
Sorry if I've put too much dialogue in Chapter 1 (continued) ~~~ Detective Henning sat outside The Rose pub scanning the local girls for a...
Chapter 1 (first half) Leila was watching tv when her phone went off, it was Tamie 'hi buddy, me and Kathie are having a drink tonight, did you...
This looks cool so I thought I'll join Name: Dae Hunter Age: 16 Looks: 5'8 brown hair with dark red highlights that reaches the middle of my...
Thanks, I haven't written in a while so that probably explains it
Hi guys, I'm chucking a new name into the mix here, but here's the prologue for a story I'm writing called beneath the rose. Any advice?? Hearts...
Old secret meetings used to hang up a rose to signal secrecy, so I used this concept for a story idea. I hope you guys like it, I'll update it...
I'm hooked on another of one of your stories, these is awesome
Hey ele, I know it's been a while since your last post on this, but it was a good read :)