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A change of viewpoint now, it's Scottie's turn Chapter four: Scottie (first half) I looked at Leila, she still hasn't got used to the fact that...
Hazel: -walks out hearing my name- "Patrick? What are you doing here? Here's some food." -chucks a couple of cans at him- "there's more in the store."
Hazel: -walks down the empty main street, walks into the store, takes tinned food, juice, glass bottled water and a new can opener, walks out of...
Hazel: -jumps off the wall and onto the floor, looks around and sighs, then walks into the woods towards her home in an abandoned town-
Hazel: -gets her water bottle and has a drink, looking out for any danger-
Hazel: -stops running and rests against a wall, climbs a tree next to the wall, then sits on the wall-
Chapter three: Leila (continued) The limo stopped, Carlo got out the front and walked over to the end garage and opened it. Herman moved from the...
Hazel: -Sits on the top of a cliff and watches the scene below on the beach and runs when she sees the guards-
Sorry forgot about that when I done it this morning
I decided to give Leila's view point of the situation so here it is ~~~~~~ Chapter 3 - Leila (first half) I didn't realise I had settled into...
Name: Hazel Scott Age: 16 Appearance: brown/red hair to middle of her back, often left loose,freckles across her nose and cheeks, pale skin....
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Although there has been a lack in participation, i decided to go with option b, enjoy the read, your feedback is appreciated ~~~~~~~~~~~ Chapter...
Hi guys, I've posted three updates in ky story, but no-one is really taking any interest in it, what should I do??
Dae: "We're all in this situation, we're all scared. So stop taking your fear out on someone who don't know. Respect others it will help you a lot."
Dae: Shifts uncomfortably in my seat "I know I wouldn't move but I can guarantee others will" I glare at the people swearing at the woman "at...
Although no one has said anything, I'm making it a bit interactive starting from this chapter, but you won't always have a say ~~~~~ Chapter...
Hey guys, before I start my next update, what do you think on making the story a bit interactive? Those characters will still end up running away,...
Dae: Watches the woman place the map on her lap, looks into her eyes, and mentally reminds herself that she shouldn't make her angry. Looks down...
Dae: "I'm just saying, but it'll be carbon not diamond. As a diamond is made from carbon."