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Fawn: -sighs in frustration- mutters "then they sell them on"
Fawn: -turns round and puts the sword behind my back- "what is it sir?" I ask politely bowing my head slightly recognising the man
Fawn: "I know it's not perfect and you're only noticing tiny things because you're a blacksmith as well. But if anyone just quickly glanced at...
Fawn: "It's okay." -coughs- "I come from the blacksmiths across town. I would like your opinion on this." -pulls out a sword- "I've seen you on...
I need a couple of votes on my story beneath the rose. Can you guys check it out and leave a vote? Thanks ~~
Fawn: "Bye dad" -leaves the blacksmiths and gets on her horse, rides into the centre of town and goes to other blacksmith. Gets off her horse and...
Hazel: -stands up and faces Patrick- "as well as being badass it carries responsibility." -Turns away from Patrick and sends the can flying into...
Hazel: -looks at Patrick- "full soda can. You crushed it. How many people can do that?"
There's a vote most of the way through the chapter so have a read and join in ~ it will also influence some characters behaviour, and Scottie sits...
Hazel: -looks at the can and then Patrick- "I guess you're a mutant too..."
Chapter five: Leila (second half) "I'm older than you" Silas was seething. "So? I made a promise. I don't break my promises." "What promise?" I...
Name: Fawn Smith Age: 23 Occupation: sword-smiths (don't know what its called iron smith maybe) daughter and black market trader Looks: mid back...
Hazel: "Jack's not the only mutant. I know you watched me when we were younger and you never figured out why. Well I'm different as I'm a mutant...
Chapter five: Leila (first half) I had already got changed, sorted and currently listening by the door. Fumbling I grabbed my bag. Calm down,...
Hazel: -shifts awkwardly at Patrick's response- "you don't know do you." -looks at him- "you never figured it out. He's not the only mutant..."
Hazel: "What brings you here Patrick, I haven't seen you in years. Who's Jack?" -sits in room at the back of the building-
Hazel: "There's no time. Come on." -waves my hand and runs into the building-
Chapter four: Scottie (continued) I spoke up, "Zac's mum lives here too so she can give you any help if you need any." Leila squeezed my hand and...
Hazel: "If you want to stay free Patrick, I would hide. The THMs are coming." -stands in the doorway-
Hazel: -Hears the THMs and looks at a building- "quick, get in here if you want to be in one piece." -runs inside-