Separate names with a comma.
YAYAYAY! No criticism needed...too awesome already!
He did that to mine too... I worked really hard on that...
He did! Must've been something with Buckbeak... Round the Butterbeers up! Round 'em up! Butterbeers are actually really good. They're like...
A writer's professional...I haven't even graduated high school yet! And a queen is also really stern and will whoop your *** if you mess with...
S'okay, you're still welcome in Diagon Alley.
*inspiration
May the fourth be with you! Oh no! It's the fifth!
Yiiiz we do! And it's awesome!
Whatty wat.
Happy birthday Panda! This is for all the Potterheads (especially '90s kids! ) not you Muggles!
First up, Capital letters. Names, pronouns, starting sentences, etc. Caps ON. Next, Quotation marks ("") no to be mean, but this is a story, not...
Or maybe...Jake dated Chelsea too!
What.
*badbutt, Leo, badbutt.
Yeah, like I'm angry about you getting my thread locked. Loljk , I'm in a good mood now, don't ruin it please.
Blizzy's like...the queen of all queens. ;u;
ALBUS PERCIVAL WOLFRIC BRIAN DUMBLEDORE. RUMBLEROAR!
She sounds like a *****. no offense cause I don't know her, but SHE should be the one apologizing!
If you want critique, I'll give you. Try using paragraphs more. Especially in between vocal sentences. It helps the readers navigate and...
GOOFY GO-I'M READY. I'M READY. Rawr: I pop up in a few threads every so often I've seen you in a few