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Fawn: "Right. So you need your knees loose and relaxed like me. The first thing is a basic block." Brings my sword almost horizontally in front...
Fawn: Nods and walks over to Fae placing my sword on the ground "hide the dagger for now, so tuck into your toga here." Taps my side showing her...
Fawn: "It can, but what if they sneak up on you with a sword."
Fawn: swings my sword easily in my hand "how much do you know already?" stops swinging the sword and looks at Fae.
Of course its fine XD
Haha I posted this before I asked you Jose XD
Fawn: Reaches for my leg and pulls out my sword "Rule one. Be prepared."
Fawn: "True, my dad brought me here at your age. Come on, I got a stash of swords and knives here." Heads to a cupboard and hands Fae a dagger...
Fawn: "I've never had such an enthusiatic student before." chuckles
Fawn: "Come on then, I'll show you where we will be training." Walks towards the barracks
Fawn: Nods "what about sitting near the barracks, I'm sure you never went with John there did you?"
Fawn: Whistles causing my dog to come to me, hoping there aren't anymore dogs and stands up "where did you want to see? I know a lake not far...
I'll make a couple of characters, but then I'll let you guys add some people into the mix
Fawn: nods "did you want me to come? so then Cato or Alexander don't moan at me that I let you go alone."
Fawn: Smiles slightly "did you want to go to the stables? I could show you my horse."
I'm looking to write another story, but you guys give me the characters, so be inventive! I hope you guys like the end result ~~ Paradise town...
Fawn: "I won't lie and say it will get better, but it gets easier to cope. Like I'm only just discovered my mother was killed by assassins who...
Fawn: Fiddles with her hair "it gets easier."
Fawn: Wraps my arm around Fae's shoulder "I was like that when my mum died."
Fawn: Sighs in frustration after noticing Fae gone and goes outside seeing her on the steps, so I sit beside her "what's wrong Fae? You know you...