Separate names with a comma.
*ready to throw a dictionary*
I'm trying my best not to lash at destroyer right now. So I'll move on to this thread. You can't GET respect. It's EARNED. Making a thread...
Since ^, then *no-lifes. no dash.
Feedback: I think you should maybe add some description to what he's doing. It's actually already well-described, so I have no problem with that....
I READ IT!
It's really good Torie! Use paragraphs, especially between dialogues, and se punctuation! Other than that it's great!
I'd like to enter an update of my story Different. Will be posting it later since my iPod's dying. Feel free to check it out!
No. Have you ever, when your hands are full, used your elbow or your head to switch on/ off the lights?
Have fun in camp! I love camp. be back soon!
Update!! :3
Well they don't care if they're humiliated. You don't know their name. Their face. It's just an avatar so they really don't care.
There youuu goo!
Why?
Sorry for not updating! School's coming up, and I've got to prepare! Puzzles. I like puzzles. If not, love. I have world puzzles,...
I love your title. Use paragraphs and more descriptive words. Otherwise it's great!
Woah. It's in alphabetical order too! CPTWells, seriously? So he wanted to say thank you to his friends, and suddenly he's a stuck up? Hey,...
Bump!
Punctuation. Paragraphs. Do a section about SOMETHING. Sports, forum news, ANYTHING. just do something. Thanks.