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Drake: then I don't see why your involved
Firenze: *tackles the male dragon*
Drake: for I know a spell that can make sure he will never return
Drake: may I kill this king?
Drake: if that king is alive I shall slighter him myself if it is my queen's will
Drake: never mind
Drake: *pulls away blushing and glares at Zac* tell anyone and you shall not live to see another day
Drake: *kisses her cheek then says* I still love thee Antonet
Other than that it's great
(can I make up the name?)
Drake: *a light blush crosses his face* it was thy that kept me going throughout my entire quest
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Drake: *sits down across from her and smiles*
Firenze: *in his tent being suited up along with Drake*
Drake: I seem to have forgotten where that room is
Drake: *turns around and smiles* well if my queen wishes me to stay I shall
Shade, Boomi, Marcy, and Brunock: *off to war*
(*her And he did that after Zac left)
Drake: *turns around* thank you for answer my questions my queen *takes he hand and kisses it then turns around to walk out*
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