Separate names with a comma.
Nebraska~ I haven't seen James in a while, and I'm going to start crying. I miss him so much, and I'm going to be raped at this rate! Some weirdo...
Daisy-May: *Purrs, kissing him* C'mon...
Daisy-May: *Paws at his chest* Oh Al...
No, just through P.M
=D I'd Be happy to help!
Daisy-May: *Purrs, licking his neck lightly* Al~
=P No problem. Need an editor?
Daisy-May: *Growls Playfully, pulling him closer*
Dawn: *Mews, kissing him back*
Daisy-May: *Snickers, kissing his forehead*
Dawn: I am... *Purrs, kissing his ear*
Dawn: Hello mister. >:3 *Kisses his cheek*
Daisy-May: I promise I will.... *Kisses him back, matching his passion*
(Now lets Hope Ben doesn't find unhappy Zeke.".") Dawn: :3
Daisy-May: I don't want to be alone, Al....
Dawn: >:3
Fawn: *Thinks*
Dawn: MARCUSSSS! *Squishes him*
Do put spaces after some sentences while one person is talking. And don't put commas after someone is talking and don't use parenthesis. :3 Other...
(No! Roy is!)