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Drake: *mutters a spell so dummies pop up then rides his horse and slices them in half from his horse*
Drake: *sheathes his sword then saddles his horse*
Drake: *trains fiercely*
Drake: I have to train *mutters a spell and training dummies pop out of the ground*
Re: **** in a Box Don't tone it down
Drake: *walks back outside*
Drake: what you see in the doorway is your original home
Drake: well I just got here but she's obviously a mermaid
Drake: your not human
Drake: the seer said I'd find a castle and there would be my true love now my only question is is which castle this one or that one
Drake: and there's a girl too I can't make out her face though *eyes widen* it's just like it was foretold
Re: **** in a Box I like it and think swearing humanizes the story
Drake: I see a whole army guarding that castle
Drake: *opens the door and grins* finally a combat zone
Drake: *sheathes his sword* what is it?
Drake: what is it in training
Drake: *twirls my sword in the yard slicing dummies*
Drake: *hops off the horse and puts it back in the stable*
Drake: *rides his horse expertly slicing dummies down which he made in the yard with magic*
Drake: *jumps out the window and goes to the stables*