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Speech between people should be separated Example: "Omg!" I exclaimed. "What's your problem, freak." Should be; "Omg!" I exclaimed. "What's your...
Robbie follows but shakes his head slightly and looks to see if his twin is at HQ yet. Lanie ran a hand through her dark hair and quickly...
Lanie tries to keep calm and keeps smiling at people as she helps them to move back. Robbie just kicks his horse a bit faster so he can keep up...
Robbie sighs as he watches Nick and Jake. He trots around checking the corpses and watching their backs.
Lanie helped move people through the streets while hoping her brother came back soon. Glaring at Nick, Robbie untied his horse and hopped back on,...
Robbie leans against a wood pillar with a cold look on his face, trying to keep the rest of his group out of his mind and face.
that's really good ^_^
A lot of people read but don't comment ^_^ I've learnt that ~
Emilie: I twist my hand in the air and take a bit of dirt from behind a nail. "I prefer the outdoors..."
Emilie: Sits down leaning my back against the outside of the cell, "it's better than being trapped in these though isn't it? I got a tent on the...
Robbie hops off his horse and grabs the bag off the saddle. He leads his horse to a rail and ties him securely to it. Robbie opens his bag and...
Emilie: Rolls my eyes "to get out, we could speak to them and ask to have our own rooms without any restraints."
Emilie: I watch where they take Mark. I turn invisible and walk to the cell. "Did you want help?"
Robbie sighs and rolls his shoulder as he leads his horse following Nick.
Lanie spots the flares, there's one already?!? Robbie tightened his grip on the reins [i] they're getting closer... [i]
This is so good ^_^
Robbie sighs and rolls his eyes as he slows down a little. Lanie half skips as she does her patrol along part of the wall.
Robbie smiles as they leave the safety of the walls. Lanie watches the regiment leave the walls and feels a clutching feeling in her stomach I...
Bump! I'm going to try and finish an update around my cycle speedway training tonight :)
Emilie: I stand between the two boys "there is an attack going to happen from the roof."