Separate names with a comma.
(,_,)
Dawn: I've said to much, haven't I?... *Silent, sliding to the floor*
(O.o Interesting dear child)
A couple of missing punctuation marks, a spelling error there, BUT GOOD.
(0.0 What the fuck-)
Dawn: More or less she knew your name, and I think it's your fault. ._. *Leans against the wall, playing with the tufts of lace on her dress*
(Try changing the size to the smallest or crop it)
Dawn: Exactly. ._. my daughter is insane, besides the fact you're crazy.
Dawn: She wants you to be her father. *Raises an eyebrow*
Dawn: *Snickers, rolling her eyes* My daughter has some very interesting thoughts about you.
Dawn: My niece added you to her army? *Laughs* Haha, very funny.
Dawn: *Scoffs* What the Fuck are you doing here?
Dawn: *Glances up at Dimitri* Oh..It's you. 0.0
I shall be back soon, my mouth is bleeding.
Yes really
Nunavut Katie.
(she doesn't recognize him... Yet)
Katie